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Afraid to reach out
Afraid to hide
Afraid to live
Afraid to die
Afraid to laugh
Afraid to cry
Afraid to confide
Afraid to lie
Afraid to eat
Afraid to sleep
Afraid to lose
Afraid to beat
Afraid to face…
The world
The enemies
The words
The miseries
November 25th, 2006 at 9:10 pm
2 Responses to “Afraid”
Afraid to confide
Afraid to lie
Good Trasition. I really like this afraid one. I really like the last part where you changed it around begining them with the insted of afraid. Nice finishing touch. REALLY looking forward to reading more.
November 26, 2006 @ 1:28 pmTaylor
Hey Taylor,
I just love writing poems like these.I don’t want to put a lot of words and complicate — instead i want people to have a free thinking space, and think all they want to and whatever it means to them.The last part, I felt it would be monotonous if I kept going with Afraid..so I changed it to The instead.Thanks a lot for the comment…
Sai:]
November 26, 2006 @ 5:12 pm